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(41 customer reviews) 13 of 15 people found the following review helpful
full of promise and disappointment,
July 28, 2010 dave the wet sprocket - See all my reviews
This review is from: Allies (Star Wars: Fate of the Jedi) (Hardcover)
fotj:allies is a story with a great deal of potential that is unfortunately undone with very sloppy execution. other reviewers have had some impolite things to say about the author, but i'm not going to go that far, as i'm sure the editorial process is just as much as fault. i venture into spoiler territory a bit, so consider yourself warned.
even if you're not a hardcore fan, the book can be difficult to read at times. there are jumps from one character's perspective to another's that are rather jarring, and characters behave inconsistently, sometimes from one page to the next. too many chapters begin with recaps of what happened a few pages before, as if you hadn't just read it for yourself, or needed help understanding. and then some events seem to happen completely out of sequence- for example, at one point the skywalkers are waiting for a rendez-vous with lando. luke decides to speed up the timetable (because "things have changed," he explains, though at no point is...Read more
11 of 13 people found the following review helpful
Enough already!,
July 21, 2010 Mickey K. Thompson "Mik-to" (Bethlehem, PA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Allies (Star Wars: Fate of the Jedi) (Hardcover)
I am a Star Wars geek and lay claim to reading every book of the Star Wars series from Pre-Episode I through the Clone Wars to ROTJ and then read the disappointing Legacy series. I told myself that I would not continue to read these 9 book series because, quite frankly, the Legacy series would have made a fine trilogy. It introduced too many characters that had only minor roles in the story telling and much like reading Tolkien, you start forgetting who individuals were and whether or not you missed something. I actually started jotting down notes when new characters were added to the series. Those characters were either killed off or had shortened arcs.
But I caved. I started reading Omen and I hoped that the FotJ series would be better. Maybe they learned from their mistakes. After this book, it is clear they haven't.
First and foremost, I hate hate hate having three authors writing through the book. It almost made sense in the Legacy series where Travis and...Read more
7 of 8 people found the following review helpful
2.5 - .5 of which come solely from the cool cover,
June 28, 2010 Julie (NJ United States) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Allies (Star Wars: Fate of the Jedi) (Hardcover)
I'm completely lukewarm about this book. I enjoyed the touching scenes featuring the Solos and Allana and even that nexu cub. The anti-slavery message was delivered through a neat new character, but the book lacked a distinctly Star Wars feel. The whole subplot with the journalist could have been put in any science fiction book in nearly any pre-made universe and done all right.
The writing style bothered me. Let me just recount one sentence for you. Please, try to read this allowed in one breath:
page 63 So it was that in the shaded marketplace, with artificially moist, cool air blowing about them and a few musicians standing about playing strangely complicated-looking instruments with cases looking sadly empty of credcoins, he, Vestara, and Dyon found themselves looking at a pretty impressive amount of fruits, vegetables, nuts, grains, and meats.
Still alive? Did you breathe while reading aloud?
The book bleeds passive verbs all over the place...Read more