68 of 77 people found the following review helpful
Wish I could give it no stars,
October 18, 2011 Allie "Allie" (Missouri) - See all my reviews
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Painful to read. I don't think it is manic. I think it is a seizure. Really. By the third page, I didn't care.
39 of 44 people found the following review helpful
Get rid of your Hazy Shades of Winter, seriously, they are revolting.,
February 22, 2012 Temporal Ghost - See all my reviews
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Overwrought prose in serious need of an editor, feels like a first draft in an undergraduate creative writing class. Was not worth what I paid for it.
36 of 42 people found the following review helpful
Story in search of its own particular audience,
October 15, 2011 Rett01 - See all my reviews
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Roberts' world in a "Hazy Shade of Winter" is a place where instead of writing a letter, people "pen" a note. The wind instead of being from the west is "errant." Fields don't get watered they get "hydrated." People don't wear a false face but instead present a "mannequin façade."
Roberts has created a time and place overwrought with emotion and stuffed with all things lyrical. For sure it isn't Hemingway's world.
Here, stripped of the lyricism, are some of the story details: It's 1965. Blaine isn't doing too well at Wellesley. She has a problem relating to the other students. Blaine gets shipped out to a psychiatric hospital where lithium is prescribed to even out her moods. She feels she hates her mother. Her mother visits. Blaine attempts to strangle the woman with her own paisley scarf. Blaine is removed to a treatment room and wrapped in a cold (48 degrees F), wet sheet until her lips turn blue. The cold-water treatment leaves Blaine with nerve-damaged...Read more